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All Comments on 'Pyramid'

by tungtied2u

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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
mention

this poem is mentioned in the thread 'New Poems Reviews'

champagne1982champagne1982over 17 years ago
loved this

haunting and fearful illustration of a man faced with his mortality. Always a powerful subject and using the pyramids as an example of a timeless legacy was perfect.

(you used an apostrophe in the possessive form of "its")

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
symbiosis...

pens your journey well...connecting...key...I liked it..blue

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