by My Erotic Tale
rhymes are like a song that you hear and you just can't get it out of your mind......lol/blue
thanks Art, you never fail to place a smile on my lips. Sabina. <I blow a kiss in your direction>
your poem has been mentioned in today's reviews
Rhyming poems aren't so bad! And you, dear Art - please don't be sad! 'Cause if you didn't write such prose... We wouldn't be reading "A Cherokee Rose" <grinnin'>
Vixxx
I REALLY like your poetry!! But I dont undrestand all about this one. It must be to much Zen for me. I just dont read any rhyme. Why is it named Rhyming-itis . It dont rhyme when I read this poetry?? I do REALLY like it!!
the same compulsion about writing poetry and making sure everything rhymes.
creative poem art, and a catchy title too. i like stuff like this!!.........don
Can't get over this one ART... too cool! ;)
can't wait for your chapter of Bare Bottom Resorts to post! ;) it's gonna be an interesting chain judging from the authors we have onboard so far! ;)
kisses babe,
T
Now that's good, when you pull the rhyme from the reader's mind. Nice and light with chuckles to spare.
Great job! :)
If I had the time
A few words I would say
And critique your...
Verse.
Your poem brought a little smile
That will stay on my face
For a ...
minute (or two.)
I promise I'll stop
Trying not to rhyme
This verse just seemed to...
founder.