All Comments on 'sand castle flimsies'

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tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
This must be...

beach day here. There are a few thinking about the teasing summer just around the bend. Great images and language!

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
I never took that walk

But I always wanted to.

Great language here ...can hear and smell and feel it all

Nice work

Thank you

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
go boldly toward the sunwarm blanket!

Really great poem. I want to go to the beach!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Excellent!

As per always, I enjoy your look and way with words. You pen well ;)

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