All Comments on 'Sarah's Surprise'

by Curiouswife

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ReltneReltnealmost 19 years ago
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I am not sure if you write poetry, or descriptive and emotive vignettes, but whatever they are very good!

Thank you for a good read.

TathagataTathagataalmost 19 years ago
beautiful

wonderfully phrased, and the ending was perfect.

Made me smile.

Thank you

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
superb...

and has that touch of the narrative prose and soaks in me with vivid imagery. could it be almost like saying, "a frog in the throat in no more?" just a hunch. wonderful stuff......don

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyalmost 19 years ago
Very Sweet ~!!

What a wonderfullll story.

I can *see* it all.

I too write a lil like this at times.

Oft times, we just gotta

say what we think ... feel.

Just loved this touching, heartfelt story

of you and your * beauty * ~

Lotz more Please~

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