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Click hereThere's blood on the moon tonight.
I watched as it rose between the blue hills,
the mist running before it.
There's blood on the moon tonight.
I prayed as it rose
that my loved ones would be spared.
Theres blood on the moon tonight.
Wringing my hands to wash out the sins
as I walked in its obliterating path.
Septembers Bloody Moon; shall it always be so?
... I am in agreement with some of the others that there is a lot evoked by these ten lines. Great spark-thrower! It makes me want to write a story to go behind it, although not necessarily for Lit...
this left me wondering what..but boo this is wonderful!!
care to enlighten on the rest of the story?
this is my first real chance at reading some poetry in about 4 weeks..nice place to start!
and it rose to the challenge. This is wonderful.
it seems this poem has potential for development and was stifled by the constraints of the challenge rules / if this were mine, i would expand it by a large margin /