All Comments on 'Shooting the Breeze'

Met you always move so many!

I can see you with a shot gun, shooting just to break the silence, or send those egrets flying by the hundreds. I would point out one thing;

triggering a smile

aimless for awhile

going a porch swing mile

'going', seems weak, I would try swaying, swinging, or rocking. I think it needs a stronger and more direct word in its place. Don't shoot me.

Alby-reading poetry

I can't see using any word except 'going.'

Excellent feeling here ~

Had me rocking in my chair

To the beat of your words.

Love your word play :)