All Comments on 'Silent Questions'

and very classy erotica. Not once did I see the word "fuck". I especially liked this passage-

<i>Where you wanted them

Where you want them

Where you beg for them</i>.

The wanted/want was a nice play. Overall, I enjoyed the poem, one spot you adverb-ed a bit too much- "tirelessly/silently" it threw me off a little.

I truly enjoyed reading this and hope to see more work from you.

~NJ

.... in gasps and sighs and moans. Classy erotica - sensual without being crass; intimate without being crude.

Lovely!

Fx

Your writing is as beautiful as ever. The visions you conjure are simply exquisite, and your words take my breath away. I look forward to your next submission with great anticipation.