by Liar
I liked the way it floewed first off then the topic became more clear and I love the way you put a reader into the 'skull' of an object as was with 'love letter' It's always a pleasure to read the zen masters of poetry <grin>(~_*) and I aint a liar <laughin':>
and the poem itself was zen hypnosis! Totally entranced Me with its silky flow and captivating images. Probably the most beautiful debris I have ever seen! You were one hundred percent truthful with this one, Liar <smile>
Vixxx
you are a poem which endlessly offers enchanting words and visions, just as this one has.
There's a lot packed in here and it needs multiple reads but is well worth it. Thanks
Your titles are outstanding reflections of your poetic sense. Listening, heard and mulling in the salvaged essence of the work.. nicely done
Du Lac~
This one is my favorite of yours. So wonderful. Such talent. Thank you for sharing.