All Comments on 'Slave's Sonnet'

I see your first poetry submission is a sonnet. Glad you tried a more challenging form instead of a simple rhyming pattern.

An interesting effort in a restrictive form.

You should get points for attempting it.

You could easily remove the strain from a few rhymes, And there must be an alternative to "bald pate", even if it is descriptive.

okay this was a prime example

of sonnet. excellent work

descriptive and visual

also enlightening~

A sonnet is very difficult and time consuming to write. To write one well, as you have done, is much more difficult. Bravo!