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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
OBLIVIOUS, IMPERVIOUS, SUPERFFLUOUS

in the morning wake up all is restored TK U MLJ LV NV

TzaraTzaraalmost 12 years ago
Nice sonnet.

Perhaps a little too end-stopped, which gives it a feeling of someone reading a list, but overall well-done. Enjoyed it.

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I enjoy caring relationships with quiet, polite, women with open minds and good senses of humour, be it in a longer-term arrangement or just a one off. If you are up for it, I will engage in daddy-ply, d/s play, impact play and other sensual games. Definitely not into hurti...

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