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Reltneover 19 years agoRant?
Interesting with some fun word play!
Shouldn't "plays scrabble" be "play scrabble"?
twelveooneover 19 years agoI you have to write
about writing, this is the way to do it
"and the pixies of epiphany
plays scrabble
through the babble"
My Erotic Taleover 19 years agozen master of pen~
wow awesome poem, I even got it and relate
or is that me getting better?
or your slipping... better grip tighter
hehehey! I loved it~
sackover 19 years agoYour word tumbling....
Works better than in previous poems, as it seems to fit just right with the sentiment expressed here. One of your best, a hearty "bravo" from me!
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