All Comments on 'Snake'

The section is parentheses is sinfully delicious. :)

I especially liked the section in parentheses, but the whole poem is satisfying!

Then I decided to see what you had to say about snakes. :)

I was not disappointed at all with the poem.

personified. a true mastery. Thank you, Shanglan.

Please continue.

sensiously and passionately delivered - snakes ain't normally like this - are they???

Never have I seen snakes described so passionately and sensuously before. Demonstrates them in a whole new perspective.

I love the sinful edge of snakes, and the power they possess to evoke such fear is truly delicious. You've captured the raw and ragged. I really enjoyed this poem.

~lucky

There is more to this than I am reading and I've read it twice. Very good description. Interesting construction of the poem. Okay, time to go read it again and figure out more of the symbolism....

Foooooolish :D

God, you're brilliant.