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very heavy shit there mutt!

i left the comment then sat here looking at the title.

asking myself what hidden message was there..duhh!! lol

just call me blondie

Excellent portrayal of the accuser. The term "coward choir" was particularly inspiring. Thanks for posting this.

...of really good stuff here....strong stuff. I think the poem would benefit from some stanza breakage.

You use a lot of rich language in this poem, but it exhausted me, please use more line breaks....

I do not use the thermometer

I think this is GREAT! I don't say that often and I'm no pro, but I really really liked both form AND content!! Thanks a lot!

. . . or just echoes.