All Comments on 'Solstice Midnight'

"Shy now,

as if it hadn't

a hundred million times

already."

awesome line, Liar in a beauty of a poem!

has been mentioned on the new poems thread. :)

... a reincarnation of the dawns before, born on a solstice morn.

Thank you for a wonderful look.

I don't go for mushy stuff but I love the dawn. This is

good and true.

love it Liar, the word choices especially, only thing that bugged me just a little bit was the very last verse, I think it would be better without it, but thats just me :) good work

radical poem ...

new day dawns~