All Comments on 'Sonnet for National Nude Day'

by Alex De Kok

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AngelineAngelinealmost 20 years ago
Alex!

You wrote a sonnet! It put such a smile on my face when I saw it. It's really lovely, echoes of Shakespeare and sweetly sly, with that silly ending. I don't even care that it doesn't always rhyme, lol. Well done, author. :)

cookiejarcookiejaralmost 20 years ago
How I wish...

I could write poetry. If this is your first sonnet...I applaud you.

doormousedoormousealmost 20 years ago
I'm a sucker

... for great poetry.

This is one!!!!!! Shame you're not in the NND comp. I'd have voted. (oh Hell, I just did LOL) ;-)

Black TulipBlack Tulipalmost 20 years ago
Smiling

I do not usually read poetry but this one left me smiling. Nice twist at the end.

kinky shy girlkinky shy girlalmost 20 years ago
lovely piece

I'm not a big fan of sonnets, but I really liked this one. I hope you write more; I'll be looking forward to them.

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July 13, 2023 - As some of you have no doubt realised, I'm writing again, albeit very slowly. My late wife was a writer as well, although not on Literotica, and I think she would have wanted me to continue. May 24, 2021 - I haven't posted anything for some time now, and it ma...