by Alex De Kok
You wrote a sonnet! It put such a smile on my face when I saw it. It's really lovely, echoes of Shakespeare and sweetly sly, with that silly ending. I don't even care that it doesn't always rhyme, lol. Well done, author. :)
I could write poetry. If this is your first sonnet...I applaud you.
... for great poetry.
This is one!!!!!! Shame you're not in the NND comp. I'd have voted. (oh Hell, I just did LOL) ;-)
I do not usually read poetry but this one left me smiling. Nice twist at the end.
I'm not a big fan of sonnets, but I really liked this one. I hope you write more; I'll be looking forward to them.