All Comments on 'Sophia Dreams'

by NateWoeke

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Not your forte

I suggest sticking to stories. This wasn't that good. Every line doesn't have to have the same vowel sound. I suggest you write a story about how Liam gets the chance to fuck Sophia .... There are so many ways their story could end p.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Sophia chapter?

I wish you would've written more of Liam's adventures with his daughter's friends...especially Sophia.

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