All Comments on 'Squeaky Shoes.'

by El Folo

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Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoover 13 years ago
It is kinda wild...

but I like weird stuff, whatever that's worth.

El FoloEl Foloover 13 years agoAuthor
Thanks a mill!

I love feedback, good and bad. (Long as the bad gives me good reasons for disliking. "This shit sucks" doesn't really help me as a writer, y'know?)

I appreciate hearing what someone has to say about it.

PoissonSurLaLunePoissonSurLaLuneover 12 years ago
Not sure this is "erotic"

But well done nonetheless! Creepy, just as you meant it to be.

El FoloEl Foloover 12 years agoAuthor
People, please.

If you know someone who's scared of clowns, please show them this poem, and then my profile in general. It will be fucking hilarious.

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