All Comments on 'state of mine'

I just love the romantic side of your writing. Great poem. Overflowing with imagery..Loved it..~!!! More Please..~~!!

as my favorite, I would be doing you a disservice Liar. The sum of this is greater than its parts. Such wonderful imagery. What a feeling of quiet reverence and yet overwhelming in its emotion.

and I love this:

to kiss radiance

taste turquoise glow

it's way above that. What a wonderful way to express 'this thing called love'.

call it love, epiphany- love this word

a veil of distortion parted

call it what you will

but right now, it is mine- wonderful ending.

Beautifully written!

this would make a beautiful poem for a stepping stone..into MY garden :) loved it Liar, beautiful work

wonderful poem!^5

is a many splendid thing, and this poem shows how wonderful it can be.

Great poem, Liar. But then again, all of your poems are.

Honey123