All Comments on 'Summer'

This is a fun poem. The poem has excellent rythmn and it flows well off the tongue. There is some good imagery here as well esp in the last line. Pretty good overall.

A sweet look at life and love.

Just flows smooth as silk and

your imagery is spot on !!

I also like the play of words,

you drew me into your summertime

... wishing.

Thank you !

More Plaese

A different view,

to warm us through

the season we call fall;

recall these words

when thoroughly chilled,

and flakes will be but minor.

Very nice...

that the season is gone,

and in the winter

builds the fire..

you have packed quite a

meaning in to so few lines

I liked it, much.

-sGp-

subject was light and wispy ...filled with heart of natures beat...enjoyed much of the images...bluerains

My God, a poem on this website with meaning, strong images, and something real to say? Wow!

Keep writing. Liked it.