- Erotic Poetry
- Tear Me Down
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Click hereHot tongues swirl thru pools
of joyously swapped spit.
Losing emotional control,
she forecloses on my soul.
I need her hot fuck;
the passion beyond lust,
where minds are useless
and only spasms exist.
Want to be torn down -
urban renewal of my id;
then rebuilt as a monument
to all that is orgasmic.
- COMMENTS
unpredictablebijouover 15 years agoThis piece is exactly as it should be: tight, hot and simple, like the fuck it describes. There's clear affection here, too, which makes it even hotter. NICE!
sassynycover 15 years agoOh, but honey.....that last stanza is poetry on it's own. That sucker's got legs! It could stand by itself. :)
normal jeanover 15 years agoYou do express yourself very well and have given me huge insight into your lifestyle. i only have one tiny nit-pick, and that is the abbreviated form of 'through' you used thru...
I'm just a stickler that way, when no other abbreviations are used, that one seems out of place. Changing it would not change your meter or meaning...just a suggestion. :)
enjoyed the read!
NJ
