All Comments on 'Tear Me Down'

You do express yourself very well and have given me huge insight into your lifestyle. i only have one tiny nit-pick, and that is the abbreviated form of 'through' you used thru...

I'm just a stickler that way, when no other abbreviations are used, that one seems out of place. Changing it would not change your meter or meaning...just a suggestion. :)

enjoyed the read!

NJ

That last stanza is fantastic.

Oh, but honey.....that last stanza is poetry on it's own. That sucker's got legs! It could stand by itself. :)

This piece is exactly as it should be: tight, hot and simple, like the fuck it describes. There's clear affection here, too, which makes it even hotter. NICE!

I know the feeling - you express it so well.

Fx