All Comments on 'Temple of Ass(120)'

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Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 10 years ago
a Temple where all Bottom Fetishists gather :

like yours Truly , here , Harry !! Very funny !

buttersbuttersalmost 10 years ago

love the way you speak directly to the reader - bring them straight in with the first words, like you're chatting to someone sat on the next barstool... (title says who, lol, and the reference to 'bounty' harks back all piratical)

i guess my point is that you embrace the reader with that easy style you employ. it delivered some smiles for sure ;)

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