All Comments on 'Terra'

This would be a much better poem if you had not missed the rhyme in the fourth line of the first strophe.

i.e. "As the sun plays hide and seek."

Ah yes,

but still I like the picture

your words paint...

I like your near-rhyme, and would like to see more of them in your writing actually. Nature, is imperfect, that is what makes it beautiful, and I feel the same way about poetry. Very pretty combo here. as

reading this one ..its has much earthen substance and heart..warm sighs/bluerains

I loved the images that this poem gave in my mind; rich, deep and earthy...

The lovely pastel drawing seems to set the stage for this delicate rendering. I loved the abundant imagery contain in the delightful stanzas.

what gaia seeds. TK U MLJ LV NV