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by Samuelx

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Packs a Punch ~

I can *feel* such emotion here.

Just a lil dry so to speak.

Paint us a picture my friend.

Show us this pain and how it feels

to be the master of all, yet nothing.

I love the feelings here, and you have

a lot of potential.

I feeelll a lot here, just poetry is

... painting, with words to me.

No offense intended,

here is to the next painting

... your Masterpiece ~

*Smiles*

More Please,

because I know you can do this !!!

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I am Samuelx. I am Black. I am Male. I was born in Cap-Haitien, Northern Haiti, and raised in Brockton, Massachusetts. I now live in Canada. I am the one and only Haitian Trickster, and quite simply live only by my own rules. I...