All Comments on 'The Aviary'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
review

Your poem has been mentioned in the reviews.

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Oh My ~

This one took me a bit. I like the thought you put into itwith the very catchy phrasing. I just had to see the legend to * get it * Like how you did that too, lol.

Unusual and thoughtful, now I wanna go and lookie in tha forest to see if I can catch* any of'm.

* Smiles *

Keep'm coming ~

AngelineAngelineover 18 years ago
Twice

Your poem has been mentioned twice. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
impressive

sort of fun in a weird way. I liked it.

sacksackover 18 years agoAuthor
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I'm very grateful that no one has said this poem is "for the birds!!"

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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WTF ~

Oh, now I see...

Pardon, it's a bleary-eyed Sunday peer.

Damn Sack - you even took away the bird-line with your comment! A good one...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
*

I read your poem thinking, "what is this?" Then I got to the bottom and smiled. Thanks.

Curiouswife

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
ditto the comment of CW

winks blue

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
SACK!

You have entirely too much time on your hands! You need a hobby.

Oh? This is it?

Well, that's okay then! Keep it up! I mean, keep writing!

You do have a weirdly inventive mind!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Damn!

sack stole the comment that came to me first off. Seriously, I love anything original and this is ORIGINAL!

Tess

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
a telephone wire...

might not be able to withstand such a ruckus...*LOL*. definitely original.....peet-suh.......don

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Listening in...

At last we have a bird vocabulary ~ the worlds been needing this for ages - and with a legend yet... Funny and witty!

Now when the Red Red Robin comes bob bobbing or we get insulted by the upstart crow - we can talk back...!

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