All Comments on 'The Best Of Bad Writing'

This was cool of you to write, I almost thought your account was hacked. The criticism on Literotica for authors, especially black nonhetero authors, can be so harsh, it’s great you can acknowledge but also say f u to the people who only want to see you fail. Neat work, I’ll probably never read all your stories but I’ve read enough to know you’ve got a good thing going. Keep it up!

Its cool that you acknowledge that you suck. Maybe in the future you can make an effort to improve. Until then, youre just going to keep getting hate and 1 star.

If you know that you are a bad writer, what stops you from correcting that? It's not that you write about Muslims and Africans and Haitians. It's that you write the same story over and over again. A big and fat Haitian man (you) rams bis big black cock up the butthole of short and curvy women. Then, a pale and wimpy white man does the same to you. You add the MOST insipid conversation while this is happening, and you post it as INTERRACIAL normal. Does it piss people off? Yes, it does. You just keep regurgitating the same story, Sam. Now, when your name comes up I automatically give your stories one star without reading. I gave this poem one star and it is actually pretty good! Is that your intent? To earn the derision of your fellow writers? Because it is more indicative of a problem with YOU than it is with US. Develop a different storyline, Sam. Develop your characters. Put them in problematic situations the differ from the racial pap that you seem consumed with. Get them out of these situations. Stop with the repeated use of the same adjectives. PICK UP A THESAURUS. There just isn't a whole lot of positive imagery about fat people fucking.