All Comments on 'The Cement Fort'

Keep pounding dear one... this was a wonderful revealing write and I loved the metaphor..

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and an excellent metaphor used in a compelling way. you certainly are letting out the soul with each chip. and in a way it can also say from a writing standpoint, that this is what we do each and every time we write. that is my take......great write........don

Chipping away at one's life - seeking a more perfect existence ~ finally achieving the perfectly formed ideal. Wonderful metaphor!