All Comments on 'The Faerie'

A very excellently written erotic poem. Other Lit. erotic should take a lesson from this poem. :rose:

It has the feel of an age gone by. I loved it's gentle rhythm and quaint eroticism.

The rhythm and rhyme work to enchant the reader. I couldn't resist reading it aloud. The transition from a yard ornament to an animate partner worked well.

Nicely done!

This poem is wonderful- my favorite kind of thing, too! Except for the few halty spots where the rhyme stuttered it is perfect! Thanks, Ronde!

Devastatingly evocative and erotic. Paints a beautiful vision of passion and emotion with a palette of words and rhymes.

stunning pse forgive me but im so keen 2 read another of ur stories just read this once will return 2 savour but 2 keen to become involved in another of ur stories