All Comments on 'The Last Griz~'

An excellent nature-themed write

With poachers run amuck

And a magnificent life ended

Just for sport.

when I see you being such a shit to other people who post here.

Although you've never made any comment to me personally, I would think about how you treat others in the future. Or turn the voting off. It's too tempting to give you a zero just for being the prick you are.

I used my valuable time and read this poem-- andleft a comment on this poem! It was honest-- thoughtful-- gave things I thought to be strengths and gave a few simple suggestions, things to think about. What gives MET? You say don't leave a vote without a comment but anything beyond "You are a genius" gets deleted? I gave it a four and everything! That is the last comment I leave on your poem. Don't ever bitch about people who leave votes without commenting.

annaswirls

something but hey, I go my own way anyway with what I do. I liked it, very descriptive and inventive.

I like the first 3 stanzas. I don't really like "Griz." And why is it Griz~ in one stanza and just Griz in the next? I'm torn between a 3 and 4 vote, but since you probably find 3 votes worthless, I'll just give it a 4.

This poem works very well for the first few stanzas but then was ambushed by a cliche - the "babbling brook", somehow the remainder seemed less effective. I am not too keen on the Griz abbreviation .It doesn't seem respectful to such a creature.