by Kundalinguini
...and very graceful throughout, with no sign of strain or loss of strength in what obviously was a lengthy and difficult write! Bravo!
The ride of words was pleasantly long, like a story that grips your eyes and holds fast for the ride of mental flight till it glides to an end. The setting was descriptive and the tale wonderful, heartfelt and worth the time to read. Poetic word wizard you are. Perhaps a zen master of pen.
Ohboy I absolutely LOVE it! My very first saved fav! (if I can figure out how to do it) I didn't know we could do this... You caught my breath and opened new doors! Thanks a zillion, K!!
I knew an epic was in the works and here it is! This is just wonderful in the tradition of The Ancient Mariner. I printed it out in order to read it. I absolutely love this piece. The thought and emotion put into it is considerable. I hope everyone reads it from beginning to end.
This gets better each time I read it. An absolute 5, and a well deserved H!