- Non-Erotic Poetry
- The Line with the Most Bait
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Click here"Anything in fantasy is fine"
But where do you draw the line?
And does that line stand firm
or inch away with time?
Have you been blinded in black
when fantasy becomes reality?
Or are you convinced it's still white
while in the dark you're groping?
It's all gray to me
but I know anything is not fine
I know when I'm inching too far
I know when I've crossed the line
So tell me, have I done it this time?
- COMMENTS
snobud33almost 19 years agoOne must always know where the line is, if they cross it have they crossed themselves? If they don't have they gone as far as they need? Have they gone far enough, or not? That's life and only that person knows...or not.
You are still writing well, keep up the good work.
Your friend.
Snobud
dcpoet44almost 19 years agoof a mighty fisherman - can get a lot of hits. aside from that, it does leaves one to ponder it as if a riddle in a sense. that is the particular feel i ended up with. the second stanza makes me think of a writer - black on white and though it is somewhat obscure, it makes the reader think. nicely done......don
LeBrozalmost 19 years agoThe choices we make
the lines we've drawn;
A good question you ask
for it happens daily
as choices and lines are redrawn
