All Comments on 'The Line with the Most Bait'

but the second verse held me up. sandspike

The choices we make

the lines we've drawn;

A good question you ask

for it happens daily

as choices and lines are redrawn

of a mighty fisherman - can get a lot of hits. aside from that, it does leaves one to ponder it as if a riddle in a sense. that is the particular feel i ended up with. the second stanza makes me think of a writer - black on white and though it is somewhat obscure, it makes the reader think. nicely done......don

One must always know where the line is, if they cross it have they crossed themselves? If they don't have they gone as far as they need? Have they gone far enough, or not? That's life and only that person knows...or not.

You are still writing well, keep up the good work.

Your friend.

Snobud