All Comments on 'The Mime'

by xelliebabex

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pelegrinopelegrinoabout 10 years ago

Only my mind said "go away"

In the animated story telling

He flung the next man from his chair.

And made enough noise for two

Of the strange flings I've encountered

That one goes to the top of the list

And all others.

I like your sense of mimics and your rhythm and rhyme. Well done!

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JWrenJWrenover 9 years ago
I think . . .

I think I should stay mute in honour of this refreshing work. Mouth it: Loved it!

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