The Mousetrap

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It was a game to him:
cheese on a string, trailing
across a dirty cellar floor.
Tempting a mouse
with scrumptious tales
full of holes.

He was waiting to pounce
in my mouth, slipping
one thought in,
another thought out.
Twisting throughout,
repression and release.

I scampered
in delicious desire, mouth-watering
temptation dripping
at my feet: a skirt
to be hiked up dirty.
I tongued the bait
and plucked his string.


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dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
this trap is......

hot and the string is a great tease too. very nice......don

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Cunning...

and hot!

Is this the squeaking sound Tzara thought he heard?

Wonderful images, CW!

Fly

cymrycymryover 18 years ago
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"I tongued the bait

and plucked his string."

...and the mouse gets her prize.

Clever poem, thank you for the read.

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
FAV lines....

"Tempting a mouse

with scrumptious tales

full of holes".

....and who has not

but done this before..

only to be ,

STRUNG ...

well done my friend,

and done well.

-sGp-

anonamouseanonamouseover 18 years ago
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rarely leave comments, votes, I make an exception with this

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