All Comments on 'The Mousetrap'

Goes to show ~

two can play at this game;

it's just a question

of how the string's played out.

Nice one.

slipping

one thought in,

another thought out.

Twisting throughout,

repression and release

~~~~~~~~~

I just love these lines.

Great imagery and flow. I can see it all playing out b4 me. Just tempting and teasing you till .... Grrr

Very fresh too. Love it~

You go gurl ~!!

More Please~

thanks for the read~

rarely leave comments, votes, I make an exception with this

"Tempting a mouse

with scrumptious tales

full of holes".

....and who has not

but done this before..

only to be ,

STRUNG ...

well done my friend,

and done well.

-sGp-

"I tongued the bait

and plucked his string."

...and the mouse gets her prize.

Clever poem, thank you for the read.

and hot!

Is this the squeaking sound Tzara thought he heard?

Wonderful images, CW!

Fly

hot and the string is a great tease too. very nice......don