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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
*you have been mentioned on today's review

great tribute to all those in service who keep the peace...blue

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Thanks Art, for a very nice write. For they too need to be remembered. And not under the almost trivialized name of "First Responder."

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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Great message Art. I would go over the wordage again and clean it up alittle bit. Two lines starting with "and" also the lack of capitalization in areas. You know me... work on it until I see no problems.. then I know there is at least 10 I can not see lol..

love ya

du~

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
A Tribute..

worth reading,

which did not take

a great force of understanding.

REALITY LIT,

packed with a punch !

*****

-sGp-

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