All Comments on 'The Sunset'

to that ego-less, universal Glory which initiates a multiplicity of feelings. The same sun which sustains life on earth, too sustains heat between lovers, real (heat) and ideal: that which inspires longing. As the sun melts into the sea, may you come to accept your longing as divine urgency. Your imagery lends itself perfectly to bring these aspects together, in ever increasing rapture. Line 8-9 hot damn.