All Comments on 'The Tunnel'

How fine!

You could drop the tunnel line from the first stanza since we know it's about a tunnel.

Perhaps:

The light at the end

inspires gentle movement

as it merely rests on the notion of entering into life without the conditions of the brutal way life can be. one could say a very warmhearted entrance. it does have that sentimental element too.......don

An exquisite rendering on the birth of a child. Done with a beautiful description of the first moments of life. Beautiful magic words that lovingly describe the miracle of birth.