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by Liar
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flyguy69over 19 years agoEchoes in Olduvai Gorge?
This is a wonderful poem; it simultaneously evokes the silence of canyon walls with the roar of history. Very nice, Liar!
normal jeanover 19 years agomade me think of
the Lascaux Cave in France. I could just see the bison drawn over the dusty trilobites, then covered with the thinnest layer of grass smoke and animal fat. very good Liar, I love stuff like this, :)
My Erotic Tailover 19 years agojudge Roy Beans Court/bar~
well that's what I thought of...anyway marvelous visuals...superb poem!
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