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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 19 years ago
subtle

but not vague.

WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
I actually

got a cool little image in my head. lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Tiger

relaxing, sounds like you!

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years agoAuthor
Nope~

I am not the tiger nor the crane in this poem! Keep guessing <grin>

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Nice.

Offers both a relaxing yet menacing image at the same time. Great visual dynamics of the hunter and the hunted.

dcpoet44dcpoet44about 19 years ago
intriguing.....

as it leaves me pondering over different conceptual conclusions. what first comes to mind is: it's multiple choice to the reader and a nice laid out trap by the writer. at least one rather unusual look at it. i'll be reading this one for a few days.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Enjoyment.

A wonderfully reading poem. Art knows how to wrap words around to make enjoyment seem effortless for us.

~A

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