All Comments on 'Tides'

Sensitive and erotic and well written. enjoyable to read!

Robertodavo.

I agree. Very colorful images, nice choice of words; however “visage” felt a bit contrived to me. Perhaps a near rhyme nearby to add some texture to its inclusion, but as a stand alone, it didn’t work for me, my only “yes but” in this enjoyable poem, and, yes, it is slyly erotic.

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