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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Excellent imagery;

a tale of two jungles

and fierce battles

to survive.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Excellent

Great emotional write. Well done!

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
Damn this is good

The whole thing was so powerful, but these lines:

'anxious to have

my hunger stolen from me

as I roar with the pain

of where I have been'

knocked me on my ass.

ty,bd

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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Oh, great ending, and I really liked the first stanza. Write on, clever one!

sal

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
last stanza.....

packs it for me too. overall a nice write.....don

oregon_galoregon_galover 18 years ago
Great first line!!!

loved it!

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