All Comments on 'Tissue No. 5'

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twelveoone almost 13 years ago

Well

A5, Original yes 10 on a scale of 10, however...

zack_constantine almost 13 years ago

No haiku, obviously. Clever, though, and kind of funny.

simply__me almost 13 years ago

you teenagers!

at first I was happy I'm too old for zits. then i got mad that i'm too old for zits

so now i hate you just kiddin

it gave me a chuckle

CeliaisAliena almost 13 years ago

Arresting

Like Joyce's "snot-green sea" (at least I think that's the phrase), this has a Post/Modernist conflation of grotesquerie and wit. In this compacted form, it's as though language itself has become a tiny splatter, formless "goop" and shapely "art" getting squinted at like so many nasty, fascinating specks.