All Comments on 'To Borrow a Supernova'

After this, I guess borrowing a cup sugar is a bit of a bore. :)

what a beautiful poem!!

poem. Beautiful words. Thanks

the last line is the kicker....really a kool...pen...***** bluerain*****

you already saw in the poems thread.... but I still wanted to thank you again for writing this.

I love this line

I bathed in you.

Always, E

That was NOT supposed to be a 50 on my last comment it was supposed to be a 100... please ignore the thermo in the last message. *wanders off mumbling*

A modern love poem,

very well done.

Great image concept that only a modern writer could explore and use:

"...a sun gave up her life

for me to revel in your skin

and see that sight,

the almost hidden jolts

of tranquil heartbeats

deep within."

A must read.

That's it. I have GOT to get better about reading the new poems regularly.

Still your groupie ;)

L, I happened to see this in your sig line. It's really good, unique rhythm to it. Form and content combined exquisitely. I rarely reread a poem here, this one is getting printed. Perdita

I read Songbird and came to read more. I'm takin' off my coat and stayin' a while. Damn, man, you can write.

Your words are like a serenade ~ they sing beauty into my heart and mind. This is an extremely romantic poem. I love it.

*Honey