All Comments on 'Tomb Raider'

Very touching, Mutt! Nice rhymes, not cloying. I think you could do more with the image of his lover; build upon the sunlight knife or the savior theme. I like the former better.

It's hard to believe a mutt is such a great writer. ;)

Ok, I do like this line, alot, I will probably steal it someday forgetting where it came from.

"and passes days alone, apart, accursed."

Well done, the only criticism, I would have is it looks like it was written in another century, and thus vaguely over familiar. "Tomb Raider" nice touch, would not have minded something startling in this.