All Comments on 'Treason'

Beautiful poem. Well written. I read few of your other work. There were some beautiful songs. You are very talented.

The other comment here gives the appearance of the author commenting on their own work, because the poem is a mess. Drop all rhyming and try to find a beat, try to say something new about your personal experience. Don't play games, if you are--if you're not you've no need to be angered by this comment.