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by Exakta66

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
This is a solid poem but

I really like your subject matter but the end rhyme crushes it. Might I suggest rewriting with an internal rhyme or end rhyme that's slant and much more subtle. I think this could be a great. There's lots of good detail.

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