by Willow Rain
i like here and i can see the hesitant feeling too. it flowed nice from my standpoint.......don
about this till the last two lines,
and that brought it all into focus.
shy, tender, a little sad.
a wonderful little poem packed with all the longing of a shy woman.
Thank you
Flows really well and
the imagery is wonderful,
Good work,
Thanks.
~ J