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sandspikesandspikeabout 20 years ago
Take me out the inlet...

makes me think of earlier times, a great way to have my

1st cup.

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
The memories...

wonderful look at the nautical memories of an aging mariner. I loved the knots and terminology laced into the poem, and the ending, the slight nod to Hemingway was great. Excellent poem...

jim : )

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