When Angels Fly

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There must be thousands
of Angels flying over head
for the ground is white
from feather particles shed.

Tomorrow the white will be gone
leaving a sopping wet ground.
The Angels gather them back up
stuffed in their bed pillow clouds.

Swaying trees and sailing leaves
invisible Angels disguised as a breeze.
New Angels are sent, causing a tornado
as they rush through, heavens portal.

The howling winds mournful cry
another Angel fell back to the sky.
The coming winter telling us all
Angels shed and white particles fall.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
not bad

but there comes a time when you need to get out of the 3rd grade...

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Ualmost 19 years ago
good one

loved it as always ARTY how do you come up with ideas like these??

kissses,

T

~hellbaby~~hellbaby~almost 19 years ago
Swaying trees and sailing leaves

I love that line,in the fall I will think of it. Now if only the flowering cherry blossoms were angels, I wouldn't have to rake out the pond!

templemindedtemplemindedalmost 19 years ago
smile

excellent poem from your angel with horns. lol

nin-

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
This gives a whole new meaning...

to the creation of snow angels. Very nice.

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